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BROTHER WHYYYYY

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im literally screaming 


OH MY GOSHH

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Es un juego mediocre. 

Trata temas que pueden funcionar perfectamente,pero no se hace con respeto, sino como una BURLA. A pesar que estéticamente es hermoso, y que el actor de voz sea GRANDIOSO, eso no salva una mala escritura. Tiene un concepto grandioso,pero está tan mal desarrollado que parece un fanfic de 2015.

Pero,a pesar de que sea un juego de finales malos es imposible negar que estéticamente es grandioso para haber sido desarrollado en un mes. Ojalá todo lo que invirtieron en la estetica lo hagan en la escritura.

just... wtf lol (but in a good way)


5k is nothing pshhhhh 

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what the balls bro

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I AM CRYING SO HARD RN-- and I've just seen one of the endings. Like, I read the comments to spoil myself, I didn't want to cry that hard, but DAMN-- great game tho

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the first ending i got had me in tears, (all the endings to be honest), but anyways, this was such an amazing game - i wish i could play it for the first time again! i need more zilas content stat 😭😭

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a wonderful game, it's really good, but i'm so sad

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my baby my baby you're my baby. no chichos no acepto esto 

no no lo digas

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i'm crying

guys what is going on

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I THOUGHT THIS WAS A CUTE DATING SIM WHAT?? MY POOR BABYY NOOO☹☹

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The way I slammed my laptop shut when I got the ending.... WHAT???

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i- ...... :(((

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以下有剧透大家谨慎观看。只说缺点,优点也有很多但我很想吐槽缺点


我草我他妈惊呆了哥们,不是,error143不是很可爱的小游戏吗??我在小红书看到作者新游立马就过来下载了,玩着玩着感觉被癫死了,,,,

利益相关我打出了一个他杀一个自杀结局

  1. 他杀结局

我完全没看懂,男主向观众们宣告自己要和主控订婚我心就嘎嘣一下,哥们你跟我提过吗就突然订婚,,,额,,,

再其次就是宣布订婚后主控莫名其妙拿起了刀把男主捅死了,我就belike:wtf??男主也没有一点吃惊,跟我说不是你的错。莫名其妙啊,那是谁的错,感觉是玩这个游戏的我的错,,,

看了评论剧透说其实都是男主养的猫的问题,它是boss并且最后操控了主控。对此我有六点要讲:。。。。。。

其实这种浮士德式故事我完全没问题,但最大的问题就是作者在一整个游戏流程中完全没有明示暗示过“黑猫其实是boss”这种设定,让整个故事的转折显得十分突兀烂尾,我们itch有自己的主播女孩重度依赖,,,

2. 自杀结局

这个比起前一个没那么诡异,但也是很癫的东西。

作为一个抑郁症患者,我完全没看出男主有任何"明显的"抑郁倾向。是的,他确实说过一些暗示类的“至死分离”“咱俩能不能早点去旅游”和他有时候会焦虑,但我真没看出来他的抑郁严重到要上吊自杀的程度(我觉得如果按照前一个结局的说法,也许男主也是像dokidoki里的sayori一样是受到了boss的影响。问题是这一点在剧情里没有体现)我只觉得男主挺温柔挺粘人挺可爱。

作者姐请问你的文本是代笔写的么,明明错误143写的挺好的,,,说实话主控有时候说的话都让人汗流浃背,直呼我草牛逼情商好低。感觉这游戏像个半成品预制菜

本人玩完真是身心受创,不知道是因为我的电子蝴蝶赛博男友死了所以难过,还是作者对抑郁症的描述如此轻描淡写一笔带过让人对抑郁症刻板印象加深而难过。以及我觉得这游戏应该大概可能也许(叠甲)受到了一点主播女孩重度依赖和ddlc的影响,男主也说了几句日语和喜欢的食物是寿司。这种程度影响真的无关紧要,但能不能把剧情写好点让转折没那么突兀捏

3. 吐槽

说实话这块我最看不懂。这块我是看评论区说的,想得到好结局需要达到五千评论。老天奶啊你在干什么,珍妮你和别人不一样不要把时间浪费在做游戏上,,,

首先你的坏结局要做的很震撼人心合理合情地滑落深渊让人不由得落泪才能搞这种吧,你这个结局如此突兀好像喂了玩家依托答辩,我不想吃答辩还得去努力评论拉票,老天爷,,,真不知道说什么。罢了。超级道德绑架

看小红书目前还没有中文测评,如果有看到这条评论而且想做测评的请随意拿走借用,记得标明作者。总之我不太推荐大家玩,而且美工良莠不齐也是个大问题,看到前面老公帅帅的脸很安心,后面结局突然变异成蜥蜴人,吓死我了,,

4. 彩蛋

第一男主捡了个猫问chat应该起什么名,看到有个chat提议阿斯代伦我欣慰地笑了。我们博德之门也是火了

第二有人问男主怕不怕黑,男主说怕,chat适时响起hello darkness my old friend,挺萌的玩着玩着突然唱出声来最后一些也许你想知道的东西:全程配音,选项很多,前半程cg很美,没有快进和存档,全是坏结局没有好结局。

没了,祝大家玩得开心愉快

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以及我并不推荐评论拉票行为,这完全是一种助长喂答辩作者的歪风邪气,很多好游戏作者都拿不到五千评论。如果有看到这条评价的中国玩家,请大家不要因为这个原因去拉票。。。如果这回让她得逞了,下回只会喂更答辩的东西和要求更高的评论标准,,,,,

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I CRIED MY EYES OUT # FREAKING TIMES. OMG BRO. I HATE THIS SMM. BUT GOOD JOB ON THE GAME JENNYYYY

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why am I actually crying rn :(

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Hi jennny! Loved your game but it would actually be better if there was a good ending. I hated the plot, but overall, the graphics, performance was REALLYYYY GOOOOD. I might give this a rating. :)

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THE WAY HE HUNG HIMSELF- NOO 

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this isnt FREAKING horror. bakas.. I NEED YOUR HELP

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(it got everywhere)

Hello! Come Join people are also suffering the same Trauma!

https://discord.gg/k2s6hHMS

Come join the cult- I mean server

WTF OMG WHAT

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(spoilers)

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THE ENDING WAS SUCH A JUMPSCARE OMFG.(HE HUNG HIMSELFF???))

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WHEN I TELL YOU MY JAW DROPPED

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HELP IM CRYING WHY IS THERE NO GOOD ENDING

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WE GET ONE ONCE WE REACH 5000 REVIEWS

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Please don't promote that. People have already gotten banned for making alt accounts to review this game. And the fact that a better ending hinges on such an absurd amount of reviews is super scummy of the dev. (5k is more reviews than any other game in this category has. It's such a slap to the face for other devs that received theirs legitimately.)

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I was just saying no promotion or nothing :3

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I support the comment from above, the author just collects "dead souls" (people create accounts that will not be logged in anymore, just to rate this game)

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I really wanted a good ending to this game like when he proposed I didn't think we would kill him for no reason but it's a good game none the less made me cry aswell :,3 

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I wish dislikes were still turned on so I could dislike this reply without having to openly voice my displeasure. 

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I just noticed that the dislikes are turned off, did the author do it or..?

It's just the first time I've seen this..

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I think so. It’s because a lot of people are disliking replies in defense of Jenny, just like the latter comment. 

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I don't so much have a problem that there WAS suicide in the game but more in how awfully it was written (a cheap plot twist so she could guilt her fans into reverse-review bombing her game.) If she couldn't write about such a sensitive topic respectfully and with some actual tact, it should never have been included.


I mean, obviously she can write whatever she wants, but she shouldn't be shocked when people, particularly those who have been actually impacted by suicide in some way, criticize her for it.


Edit: Also, from what I understand, the content warnings were only added to the game AFTER people complained.

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YESSS I agree!!!

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First, this is a "play in browser" game that DID NOT feature content warnings during it's original release, meaning if you played this *IN* browser you'd be not given a warning prior to playing which is creator negligence. Her twitter response just added fuel to the fire, it connects some dots but overall it still doesn't make sense. As well as people should be allow to criticize things, if you post stuff on the internet (or much less make a game and beg your viewers/player/fanbase/etc to rate it 5.0 to get a "good ending.") people are going to say something about that. Did I mention overall the lack of care towards sensitive subjects?

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The content warnings were not added until just a few days ago.I played the game when it was first released and again yesterday to see what's changed. It did not have that pop up box in game when i first played.


Those warnings should have been in the game from the start.I don't blame people for being shocked. 

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SPOILER WARNINGS ! also super long sorry sob

1. AESTHETICS OF THE GAME
I think the overall aesthetics are quite nice, i like colour scheme. The artist did a great job drawing Zilas. Im gonna be so nitpicky but personally i dont really like how the twisch(?) UI and menu doesnt have the same vibe and colour palette as the rest but honestly, it does not matter.I also really enjoy Apollo's voice acting he did really well so props to him!

2.WRITING
I am in NO position to give proper criticism as I am no writer, but this feels like a concept stage? Nothing feels complete or fleshed out it just seems like an idea that popped into the creators head one day, they worked on it a bit then published it. Only after did they realise they needed to actually make a story and rushed an overused plot twist . The pacing is a bit messed up as well and the endings are rushed. I feel like if the creator took a little bit more time to think and plan out the story better id like it alot more. The concept is quiet nice and its interesting to see this hidden meaning in visual novels. WHEN. ITS. DONE RIGHT. which this is not. also the creator saying shit about getting a good ending if the game gets more engagement is so bad.it gives the vibe that the story never was finished instead of building up hype for a new part of the story

3.RANOM POINTS OR PERSONAL PETPEEVES
I hate. HATE. how theres no save, skip, load or anything that is pretty standard for visual novels, considering theres a sizeable team i expected so much more and when comparing this game to other games of similar topics or that Dark romancey ish...(?) vibe that have been one man teams, the one man team games are significantly better in features and visual novels with teams like this exceed even more with things like character customation. Overall it still keeps up that rushed feel.

PERSONALLY. I really dont like how theres so much unnecessary stuff.like the cat voice acting. i can understand a narrator, its a nice addition for people with disabilites(? i dont know im not very knowlegable about this topic so please correct me!)or people who just dont want to read, however this doesnt work since theres no auto play. 

the humor...... It gives average vtuber fiend.I understand its supposed to be like this since its matching the current trends online. but it results in a very short lived game as in a couple of months all of these trends will die and it makes the game seem dated and cringe.In addition, i didnt see the point in having Zilas take off his shirt, it had no addition to the plot and just seemed like fan service bait.

In a summary, take my opinions with a grain of salt, my views are different to yours. And play another game. Theres a lot more games with better stuff that you can support ^^

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There’s nothing I can add about the twists/endings that hasn’t already been said, but I have to say that including a disclaimer at the beginning of the game only to call the player “demanding” and a spoilsport if they ask to see the content warnings is… not great? Even if it’s meant to be part of the ‘meta-ness’ I imagine most first-time players will see it before even knowing about that aspect of the game, and either way it kinda comes across as patronizing at best and antagonistic at worst.

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Okay, I know the description says three endings, and I know two of them are bad, but is the third one a good one? And if so, can someone make a walk-through? I don't want to keep getting the bad endings cause they make me feel sick...

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there isnt a single good ending :(

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REALLY!?😭

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there will be if we can get the game 5k ratings

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Isn't that kind of unreasonable? I would understand if it took multiple playthroughs, or maybe a little wait before we could get the good end, but review bombing the thing seems a bit redundant? Especially to just get a good ending instead of a special ending...

I think that's kind of the point? like she wanted it to basically impossible to get a good ending. she talked about it on her twitter though

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it was a fun game but i feel the ending was kinda rushed

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For how slow the beginning of the game feels, especially with the lack of a skip or fast forward button, the endings are rather rushed. The topics aren't well handled at all, the writing is messy... honestly, after Error143 I was expecting a much better experience. Such a shame.

The voice acting and beautiful art are the only positives about the entire thing.

I see the vision. I see the point the story is trying to get across. The metaphors are there and pretty obvious. But when the topics are this sensitive,It's really important to handle them well, and not make them feel like they're just there for shock value. 

Not to mention the "You'll get a good ending only if you promote the game" thing. Really? If the story you're trying to tell wasn't even meant to have a happy ending, if the whole point is to showcase how the bad side of an industry can affect a person, dangling this idea of saving the character, a character you made extremely likeable on purpose, in front of the audience's face... it feels cheap and exploitative. 

Overall, a pretty damn good idea executed very poorly.

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Spoiler warning!! I do not recommend playing this game, however if you wish to I don't want to spoil it for you! 










I feel like the endings were rushed and made out to be as "oooOoO spooky so scary" and not actual things that can actually happen. I've lost several people in my life to these game endings, and i feel like the process wasn't realistic and was leaning towards the insensitive side. It was happy and then all of the sudden it wasn't. I saw the warnings. I didn't expect such a sharp turn for the worst. So I'm gonna break it down. To start, people immediately assuming the worse (such as "You hate people with cancer") feels greatly unrealistic. I know its a game, and that people often draw conclusions like this, it just doesn't feel like anyone would draw that conclusion, especially if someone says something that sounds like it was stolen from a six year old reddit post. Second, I would like to remind you all, THERE ARE ALWAYS SIGNS. ALWAYS. Never has there not been signs in being homicidal or suicidal. Never. So Zilas suddenly taking these turns feels like a mockery or a rushed "horror ending". Its not funny and its not something that couldn't happen. Zilas had the user as a love interest to turn to and depend on. He communicated well. He had a cat he cared for. He wouldn't have just done these things on a whim. These endings genuinely made me shake in anger and disgust. Shame on the writer for this. If you're going to do an ending like this, research it. Research the signs. And be respectful when handling it in game. Something I saw others discuss is the lack of warning. Yes, there was warnings but they were hidden and if you're someone who plays without reading the bio, then you would've been greatly caught off guard. Not just because there is 0 warnings in game, but because the way they happened was unrealistic and unexpected. These things have a "I should've known all along feeling" rather than a "When was this happening????" feeling, because again THERE ARE ALWAYS SIGNS. THERE NEVER WON'T BE SIGNS. I won't just happen in two days. This shit takes MONTHS to happen. And as someone who feels guilt for not noticing this in others, THERE ARE NONE HERE. LIKE ZERO. Also leaving your partner without contact for three days after something happens to them feels like a dick move and the user is framed as the one to blame, because they didn't do anything. Honestly this game just feels like a nightmare. Its unrealistic and disgusting. I do not recommend taking this lightly, and I hope this is edited, or fixed, or just deleted.
Overall, just don't play this game. Don't get attached to something that is unrealistic and depressing. I hope the writer realizes these mistakes and never again treats such heavy topics so unrealistically and utilizes them as easy plot twists to make a quick buck. Thank you for reading my comment <3

Also also, some people are saying that "there were obvious signs", well, when I was playing those "obvious signs" to me just made me feel like he was excited to live life with the user, not that he was planning to end it. He even made plans to introduce the user. Plans for the future. Imo, he would try to do everything he wanted to do with the user before "ending it". Because people in this mindset tend to put people they love above anything else. and someone he loved made plans to stream with him, which he looked forward to. You could argue I'm looking at what I want to and ignoring what i don't like, but I feel like when he said things others view as signs, fit well into his personality and the conversation that was being held in the moment he said those things. Take from my review what you will, but I stand by the fact that it wasn't realistic and was overall Disrespectful.

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I think the game is still very good, even if the two endings are a little painful for me, hopefully I can see good endings in the future!:)

You know.. You guessed my favorite food, and my favorite color 0 ^0

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FIRST OF ALL, WHY CANT I FUCKING TYPE IN THE DAMN LOGIN THING

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Not only is this game poorly written, it's down right insensitive and doesn't make any sort of reason to reach the ending. Other than the horribly written violence, the other thing I found insufferable was 'rizz' being used (if I were to guess) over 16 times. And even if you tell the Love interest to monitor the sexual comments literally nothing happens in game. what the fuck was the point of putting the choice there if it didn't do anything? Error 143's bad ending was abysmal already because the game is "punishing you" for have literally a perfect valid boundary. Now that's [boundaries] all of what this game really talks about but it's so surface level to the point it doesn't even effect the game. The twitter explanation is also full of excuses, The love interest knew MC before hitting his goal (and I assume because MC goes to his house, long before the idea of him even thinking about being a streamer.) So how in the world is that a representation of 'parasocial relationships' and stalking? How do you forget what happens in your own game??? Did I mention the begging for rating by guilt tripping the viewer? That is some clown behavior. 

The only thing really redeemable is the artists and the rest of the team besides the creator. 

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till death do us part my ass. you literally left us all in this fucked up world by ourselves:(

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Jenny ilysm but i can't keep protecting you babe, pl

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