Hello! i've read through your comment and i would just like to respond to clarify some things you might have misunderstood! (please correct me if im wrong though!)
1. the story
yes, the story is a bit rushed since unlike other games this is a short visual novel game. it only takes 1 hour to complete all the endings unlike other visual novels that take days. i can understand your point of few with the mc talking in a way you dislike since some of the dialogue the mc says are quite forward, but lets not forget that this is a visual novel where the demographic (for this game at least) are interested in these sort of things. (if the dialogue seems too booktok then the demographic is probably for booktok)
i understand that at times it seems like we're a controlling partner but lets not forget that in the beginning of the game it's zilas that asks you for help, it's him who asks you to guide him to 1 million followers. and of course as the mc who's a more popular streamer, they're the ones who has the most knowledge with streaming (which is why in some dialogues the mc talks in depth about streaming). as for banning the mod its an understandable thing since it's not okay for a mod to say inapropriate things in streams even if you're close or not (as a mod its your job to monitor the chat and prevent anything that could make the streamer uncomfortable or to create an environment where the streamer will be uncomfortable. in the game the original mod often asks for zilas bra size which could create an environment where it would be normal for the fan base to sexualize him. and in game the only time we see the original mod actually ban someone is because the mc told them to) and mc explains this to zilas, why having a mod like this isn't okay in the long run whether or not zilas is fine with it.
2.the endings
the suicide ending is a shocker yet understanding like you said you like DDLC (me too!) but in the game you know whats going to happen because you've been warned of it. you've become aware of what sayori will do since she tells you she takes pills. but in reality people with depression or suicidal thoughts dont often warn people or tell people that they do, and often times you don't even know if someone is suicidal or not because they act "normal" there are all kinds of people in the world and they dont all act the same, like all people who have depression or suicidal tendencies they dont have the same problems or same backgrounds, everyone is different so just because zilas didnt act like he was "feeling bad" doesn't mean he wasn't it was a shocking ending because it was supposed to be.
for the reason of why he died its stupid yes but doesn't it just represent cancel culture? how he was cancelled for something taken out of context, for something that meant no harm. cancel culture often does this with cancelling people for unserious reasons out of context. and zilas was just unfortunately a victim of it, he tried to explain the truth yet despite that he still received massive amounts of hate, which can cause someone to go to the lengths zilas went. as for the homicide ending its been shown that it had something deeper going on, the mc didn't kill him with their own volition its been hinted that its because of something else thats been going on.(though i agree that they could've written a bit more detail about zilas inner thoughts and feelings to make the suicide ending not very random and a bit problematic).
as for the 5 K ratings its an unusual way to ask for ratings but this isn't the first time creators have made things like this (some mobile visual novel games also do these in exchange for good endings, although this doesn't necessarily count as manipulation, but i can see where you're getting it from!) this is most likely fraud (since the reviews wouldn't really be genuine since they only started rating the game for the good ending).if they asked for good ratings then it would count as manipulation, but they only asked for ratings in general. so whether or not the ratings are good or bad or just anything if it still hit the goal of 5k then we would still get an ending, manipulation is if someone controlled your emotional and mental state to achieve their own goals. which understandably seems like what this game dev is doing but what would the game dev achieve from 5 K mixed reviews? it would only confuse people who've looked at the reviews, they could gain popularity sure, but with the culture of visual novels doing similar things this isn't manipulation. if the game dev actively made you feel guilty for not giving the game a good rating for their benefit then that would be manipulation. and lets not forget, this is a fictional game, you've been warned that there will be suicide, homicide, flashing lights, jump scares, and animal gore.
"when do you think it's ok? You are using his death and his suicide as a way to get reviews and you think it's normal?"
hes fictional, he doesnt exist, its a controversial way to ask for ratings but you're making it seem like hes an actual human being. if the creator actually was advertising their game using someones death then that would be a completely different story.
3.her fans and her
the comments of her "mocking" her fans to me just seem like friendly banter, though i do understand your points of manipulation with the anonymity of the internet despite a game dev displaying their games to be 18+ minors can still infiltrate those places simply by adding an 18+ into their bio or other means so i do agree that it does count as manipulation if her fan base truly are minors. i dont think the game dev intended to make her fans look like fools it just seems like friendly banter to me (please correct me if im wrong here though!) her encouraging her fan base to rate the game to achieve a good ending is a thing some visual novel game devs do which isn't necessarily manipulation but again i can see your point of view. as for the unusual tweets she posts i don't see a problem in most of them, theyre just silly tweets showcasing her sense of humor, its not weird to joke about her own oc's and make silly little illustrations of them. now for the ED joke i think this one is heavily out of context, if this was a joke it would share the same humor as her "weird" posts, and to be frank that post just doesn't make any sense at all no matter how many times i read it. something is out of context and i dont think she meant it to be an ED joke (this is just speculation)
"Let's talk about her fans cause they are also CRAZY. They encourage the hypersexualization of her characters, create fake accounts to make more reviews (which get obviously deleted) and are also encouraged by Jenny. They are also a bunch of creeps in general on itch.io or the discord server"
you can't exactly hate on the creator for their fans's actions, the creator cannot do anything about what anyone does. and i dont understand why you're upset about the hypersexualization of her characters, i understand that it can be negative but in your "1. the story in general" you wrote down how you viewed the mc banning the mod as "controlling" when the reason they were banned in the first place was because they were sexualizing zilas themselves. so im sorry but it seems like you're contradicting yourself here (again please do correct me if I misunderstood this part!)
as for the creeps part, there are creeps everywhere and we can't really do anything about it but block them. whatever the fan does, does not reflect on the creator since they have no control over it.
(if there are any things i got wrong please correct me! i do not want to seem as someone spreading misinformation but after playing the game and reading this comment it just seemed like some misunderstandings happened here!!)
My keyboard isn't working when it told me to enter my name/ username. I already reload the page many times.how can I fix it? I just want to play the game T-T (I play on android chrome btw.
I can't play and this appears "Your browser does not support graphics API "WebGL 2" which is required for this content"what do i do help (my english is bad srry :(((()
I'll start with: I know this game was made in a month, however, I do think that if you're going to make a game with serious and dark topics that need researched then maybe consider... not doing it in one month. I get that it's for a game jam, and that it's also good practice to see what you can improve on, however it's just in poor taste considering how rushed, and poorly written this is. There's 8 authors contributing to this game and it still turns out like this? You probably should've chosen an easier premise for a game with an extremely short deadline. I've seen the twitter posts too, and I think your idea would've been very interesting if you decided to make this a longer project and took your time on it. This game is an example of; right idea, wrong execution.
The game has a bubbly and fun vibe the entire time right UNTIL the end which makes the endings feel extremely random. If this game was longer, you could've gone into more detail and attention on Ryuk's role earlier on in the story, because if you get an ending like the suicide one then you will not know about ryuk's involvement. You could've also made the days nearing the end a lot more eerie or jarring to get a smoother transition to the end.
If the creator intends to keep the game up then i can only hope they remake it without a deadline and take all the criticism into consideration.
this game had no reason scaring the soul right out of me with that hanging ending (i was playing this in the dark too) and i was enjoying the happy atmosphere as well. overall great game though
OKAY WHAT.MY JAW DROPPED WHEN I GOT THE STABBED HIM WITH KNIFE ENDING. LIKE.....HUH.(inside of my heart is screaming crying basically want me to throw everything)
i've seen a lot of bad comments on your page, so i wanted to clear up your feed with a genuinely positive review!
i absolutely loved the game and its concept!!!! like everyone, i also felt a bit frustrated bc i can't save my sweet bf, but i think it 100% fits the whole purpose of the game and it's really important how it also criticizes the bad sides of content creation
error143 wasn't really my cup of tea (i'm not really into micah's personality, but that's melolol), but i'm completely obsessed with the quality of your games!!! and going live hits me right on the spot!!! keep up the good work <3 love u
Trata temas que pueden funcionar perfectamente,pero no se hace con respeto, sino como una BURLA. A pesar que estéticamente es hermoso, y que el actor de voz sea GRANDIOSO, eso no salva una mala escritura. Tiene un concepto grandioso,pero está tan mal desarrollado que parece un fanfic de 2015.
Pero,a pesar de que sea un juego de finales malos es imposible negar que estéticamente es grandioso para haber sido desarrollado en un mes. Ojalá todo lo que invirtieron en la estetica lo hagan en la escritura.
I AM CRYING SO HARD RN-- and I've just seen one of the endings. Like, I read the comments to spoil myself, I didn't want to cry that hard, but DAMN-- great game tho
the first ending i got had me in tears, (all the endings to be honest), but anyways, this was such an amazing game - i wish i could play it for the first time again! i need more zilas content stat 😭😭
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I was not ready for that sui ending bro 😭
I dead ass was SHOOK, i just thought he would have took a break-..
Hello! i've read through your comment and i would just like to respond to clarify some things you might have misunderstood! (please correct me if im wrong though!)
1. the story
yes, the story is a bit rushed since unlike other games this is a short visual novel game. it only takes 1 hour to complete all the endings unlike other visual novels that take days. i can understand your point of few with the mc talking in a way you dislike since some of the dialogue the mc says are quite forward, but lets not forget that this is a visual novel where the demographic (for this game at least) are interested in these sort of things. (if the dialogue seems too booktok then the demographic is probably for booktok)
i understand that at times it seems like we're a controlling partner but lets not forget that in the beginning of the game it's zilas that asks you for help, it's him who asks you to guide him to 1 million followers. and of course as the mc who's a more popular streamer, they're the ones who has the most knowledge with streaming (which is why in some dialogues the mc talks in depth about streaming). as for banning the mod its an understandable thing since it's not okay for a mod to say inapropriate things in streams even if you're close or not (as a mod its your job to monitor the chat and prevent anything that could make the streamer uncomfortable or to create an environment where the streamer will be uncomfortable. in the game the original mod often asks for zilas bra size which could create an environment where it would be normal for the fan base to sexualize him. and in game the only time we see the original mod actually ban someone is because the mc told them to) and mc explains this to zilas, why having a mod like this isn't okay in the long run whether or not zilas is fine with it.
2.the endings
the suicide ending is a shocker yet understanding like you said you like DDLC (me too!) but in the game you know whats going to happen because you've been warned of it. you've become aware of what sayori will do since she tells you she takes pills. but in reality people with depression or suicidal thoughts dont often warn people or tell people that they do, and often times you don't even know if someone is suicidal or not because they act "normal" there are all kinds of people in the world and they dont all act the same, like all people who have depression or suicidal tendencies they dont have the same problems or same backgrounds, everyone is different so just because zilas didnt act like he was "feeling bad" doesn't mean he wasn't it was a shocking ending because it was supposed to be.
for the reason of why he died its stupid yes but doesn't it just represent cancel culture? how he was cancelled for something taken out of context, for something that meant no harm. cancel culture often does this with cancelling people for unserious reasons out of context. and zilas was just unfortunately a victim of it, he tried to explain the truth yet despite that he still received massive amounts of hate, which can cause someone to go to the lengths zilas went. as for the homicide ending its been shown that it had something deeper going on, the mc didn't kill him with their own volition its been hinted that its because of something else thats been going on.(though i agree that they could've written a bit more detail about zilas inner thoughts and feelings to make the suicide ending not very random and a bit problematic).
as for the 5 K ratings its an unusual way to ask for ratings but this isn't the first time creators have made things like this (some mobile visual novel games also do these in exchange for good endings, although this doesn't necessarily count as manipulation, but i can see where you're getting it from!) this is most likely fraud (since the reviews wouldn't really be genuine since they only started rating the game for the good ending).if they asked for good ratings then it would count as manipulation, but they only asked for ratings in general. so whether or not the ratings are good or bad or just anything if it still hit the goal of 5k then we would still get an ending, manipulation is if someone controlled your emotional and mental state to achieve their own goals. which understandably seems like what this game dev is doing but what would the game dev achieve from 5 K mixed reviews? it would only confuse people who've looked at the reviews, they could gain popularity sure, but with the culture of visual novels doing similar things this isn't manipulation. if the game dev actively made you feel guilty for not giving the game a good rating for their benefit then that would be manipulation. and lets not forget, this is a fictional game, you've been warned that there will be suicide, homicide, flashing lights, jump scares, and animal gore.
"when do you think it's ok? You are using his death and his suicide as a way to get reviews and you think it's normal?"
hes fictional, he doesnt exist, its a controversial way to ask for ratings but you're making it seem like hes an actual human being. if the creator actually was advertising their game using someones death then that would be a completely different story.
3.her fans and her
the comments of her "mocking" her fans to me just seem like friendly banter, though i do understand your points of manipulation with the anonymity of the internet despite a game dev displaying their games to be 18+ minors can still infiltrate those places simply by adding an 18+ into their bio or other means so i do agree that it does count as manipulation if her fan base truly are minors. i dont think the game dev intended to make her fans look like fools it just seems like friendly banter to me (please correct me if im wrong here though!) her encouraging her fan base to rate the game to achieve a good ending is a thing some visual novel game devs do which isn't necessarily manipulation but again i can see your point of view. as for the unusual tweets she posts i don't see a problem in most of them, theyre just silly tweets showcasing her sense of humor, its not weird to joke about her own oc's and make silly little illustrations of them. now for the ED joke i think this one is heavily out of context, if this was a joke it would share the same humor as her "weird" posts, and to be frank that post just doesn't make any sense at all no matter how many times i read it. something is out of context and i dont think she meant it to be an ED joke (this is just speculation)
"Let's talk about her fans cause they are also CRAZY. They encourage the hypersexualization of her characters, create fake accounts to make more reviews (which get obviously deleted) and are also encouraged by Jenny. They are also a bunch of creeps in general on itch.io or the discord server"
you can't exactly hate on the creator for their fans's actions, the creator cannot do anything about what anyone does. and i dont understand why you're upset about the hypersexualization of her characters, i understand that it can be negative but in your "1. the story in general" you wrote down how you viewed the mc banning the mod as "controlling" when the reason they were banned in the first place was because they were sexualizing zilas themselves. so im sorry but it seems like you're contradicting yourself here (again please do correct me if I misunderstood this part!)
as for the creeps part, there are creeps everywhere and we can't really do anything about it but block them. whatever the fan does, does not reflect on the creator since they have no control over it.
(if there are any things i got wrong please correct me! i do not want to seem as someone spreading misinformation but after playing the game and reading this comment it just seemed like some misunderstandings happened here!!)
hey your comment got deleted mine got deleted too >:(
@pome
the game is 10/10 LIKE I DIDNT EXPECT THAT OOMMGG!!!!!!!!!
great!!
My keyboard isn't working when it told me to enter my name/ username. I already reload the page many times.how can I fix it? I just want to play the game T-T (I play on android chrome btw.
I can't play and this appears "Your browser does not support graphics API "WebGL 2" which is required for this content"what do i do help (my english is bad srry :(((()
zilas is coming Zilas is coming Zilas is coming
Я ЧИТАЛА ПРЕДУПРЕЖДЕНИЯ, НО НАДЕЯЛАСЬ, ЧТО БУДЕТ ХОТЯ БЫ ОДНА ХОРОШАЯ КОНЦОВКА!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Зря играла в это на ночь....
i personally love the game, please add a good ending i want to see them actually get to be married!
good ending is recyerd
I'll start with: I know this game was made in a month, however, I do think that if you're going to make a game with serious and dark topics that need researched then maybe consider... not doing it in one month. I get that it's for a game jam, and that it's also good practice to see what you can improve on, however it's just in poor taste considering how rushed, and poorly written this is. There's 8 authors contributing to this game and it still turns out like this? You probably should've chosen an easier premise for a game with an extremely short deadline. I've seen the twitter posts too, and I think your idea would've been very interesting if you decided to make this a longer project and took your time on it. This game is an example of; right idea, wrong execution.
The game has a bubbly and fun vibe the entire time right UNTIL the end which makes the endings feel extremely random. If this game was longer, you could've gone into more detail and attention on Ryuk's role earlier on in the story, because if you get an ending like the suicide one then you will not know about ryuk's involvement. You could've also made the days nearing the end a lot more eerie or jarring to get a smoother transition to the end.
If the creator intends to keep the game up then i can only hope they remake it without a deadline and take all the criticism into consideration.
this game had no reason scaring the soul right out of me with that hanging ending (i was playing this in the dark too) and i was enjoying the happy atmosphere as well. overall great game though
I want to hold Zilas gently and give him the softest forehead kith aaaaa I love this game so much but please let my boy be happy ;w;
OKAY WHAT.MY JAW DROPPED WHEN I GOT THE STABBED HIM WITH KNIFE ENDING. LIKE.....HUH.(inside of my heart is screaming crying basically want me to throw everything)
I'm confused if rubbing cats is good now or bad 💀 LOVE DA GAEM
Love the art sm I'm devouring it and the blinking just ties it together sm. 😭 BBG DIDNT DESERVE THAT ENDING DTO
Once he said "everybody's so creative" i got irrationally angry
OMG, You broke this vtuber with this game 😱😭
lovely game but omg the sui ending
huh.....
heyyy jenny!
i've seen a lot of bad comments on your page, so i wanted to clear up your feed with a genuinely positive review!
i absolutely loved the game and its concept!!!! like everyone, i also felt a bit frustrated bc i can't save my sweet bf, but i think it 100% fits the whole purpose of the game and it's really important how it also criticizes the bad sides of content creation
error143 wasn't really my cup of tea (i'm not really into micah's personality, but that's melolol), but i'm completely obsessed with the quality of your games!!! and going live hits me right on the spot!!! keep up the good work <3 love u
I was so surprised when we stabbed him AND HEARTBROKEN LIKE WTH?!?! AHHHH I WANT TO GO AND HUG HIM NOWWWW UGHHH
AND THE SUICIDE ENDINGS AND THAT CREEPY ASS CAT IS JUST MAKING ME CRY SO HARDD
how do you get the homicide ending??
NO MATTER WHAT I DO I GET HIM HANGING HIMSELF NOOOOOOOOOOO
IM CRYING SOOOOOOOOOOO HARD
BROTHER WHYYYYY
im literally screaming
OH MY GOSHH
Es un juego mediocre.
Trata temas que pueden funcionar perfectamente,pero no se hace con respeto, sino como una BURLA. A pesar que estéticamente es hermoso, y que el actor de voz sea GRANDIOSO, eso no salva una mala escritura. Tiene un concepto grandioso,pero está tan mal desarrollado que parece un fanfic de 2015.
Pero,a pesar de que sea un juego de finales malos es imposible negar que estéticamente es grandioso para haber sido desarrollado en un mes. Ojalá todo lo que invirtieron en la estetica lo hagan en la escritura.
just... wtf lol (but in a good way)
5k is nothing pshhhhh
what the balls bro
I AM CRYING SO HARD RN-- and I've just seen one of the endings. Like, I read the comments to spoil myself, I didn't want to cry that hard, but DAMN-- great game tho
the first ending i got had me in tears, (all the endings to be honest), but anyways, this was such an amazing game - i wish i could play it for the first time again! i need more zilas content stat 😭😭
a wonderful game, it's really good, but i'm so sad
my baby my baby you're my baby. no chichos no acepto esto
no no lo digas
i'm crying
guys what is going on
I THOUGHT THIS WAS A CUTE DATING SIM WHAT?? MY POOR BABYY NOOO☹☹
The way I slammed my laptop shut when I got the ending.... WHAT???
i- ...... :(((
以下有剧透大家谨慎观看。只说缺点,优点也有很多但我很想吐槽缺点
我草我他妈惊呆了哥们,不是,error143不是很可爱的小游戏吗??我在小红书看到作者新游立马就过来下载了,玩着玩着感觉被癫死了,,,,
利益相关我打出了一个他杀一个自杀结局
我完全没看懂,男主向观众们宣告自己要和主控订婚我心就嘎嘣一下,哥们你跟我提过吗就突然订婚,,,额,,,
再其次就是宣布订婚后主控莫名其妙拿起了刀把男主捅死了,我就belike:wtf??男主也没有一点吃惊,跟我说不是你的错。莫名其妙啊,那是谁的错,感觉是玩这个游戏的我的错,,,
看了评论剧透说其实都是男主养的猫的问题,它是boss并且最后操控了主控。对此我有六点要讲:。。。。。。
其实这种浮士德式故事我完全没问题,但最大的问题就是作者在一整个游戏流程中完全没有明示暗示过“黑猫其实是boss”这种设定,让整个故事的转折显得十分突兀烂尾,我们itch有自己的主播女孩重度依赖,,,
2. 自杀结局
这个比起前一个没那么诡异,但也是很癫的东西。
作为一个抑郁症患者,我完全没看出男主有任何"明显的"抑郁倾向。是的,他确实说过一些暗示类的“至死分离”“咱俩能不能早点去旅游”和他有时候会焦虑,但我真没看出来他的抑郁严重到要上吊自杀的程度(我觉得如果按照前一个结局的说法,也许男主也是像dokidoki里的sayori一样是受到了boss的影响。问题是这一点在剧情里没有体现)我只觉得男主挺温柔挺粘人挺可爱。
作者姐请问你的文本是代笔写的么,明明错误143写的挺好的,,,说实话主控有时候说的话都让人汗流浃背,直呼我草牛逼情商好低。感觉这游戏像个半成品预制菜
本人玩完真是身心受创,不知道是因为我的电子蝴蝶赛博男友死了所以难过,还是作者对抑郁症的描述如此轻描淡写一笔带过让人对抑郁症刻板印象加深而难过。以及我觉得这游戏应该大概可能也许(叠甲)受到了一点主播女孩重度依赖和ddlc的影响,男主也说了几句日语和喜欢的食物是寿司。这种程度影响真的无关紧要,但能不能把剧情写好点让转折没那么突兀捏
3. 吐槽
说实话这块我最看不懂。这块我是看评论区说的,想得到好结局需要达到五千评论。老天奶啊你在干什么,珍妮你和别人不一样不要把时间浪费在做游戏上,,,
首先你的坏结局要做的很震撼人心合理合情地滑落深渊让人不由得落泪才能搞这种吧,你这个结局如此突兀好像喂了玩家依托答辩,我不想吃答辩还得去努力评论拉票,老天爷,,,真不知道说什么。罢了。超级道德绑架
看小红书目前还没有中文测评,如果有看到这条评论而且想做测评的请随意拿走借用,记得标明作者。总之我不太推荐大家玩,而且美工良莠不齐也是个大问题,看到前面老公帅帅的脸很安心,后面结局突然变异成蜥蜴人,吓死我了,,
4. 彩蛋
第一男主捡了个猫问chat应该起什么名,看到有个chat提议阿斯代伦我欣慰地笑了。我们博德之门也是火了
第二有人问男主怕不怕黑,男主说怕,chat适时响起hello darkness my old friend,挺萌的玩着玩着突然唱出声来最后一些也许你想知道的东西:全程配音,选项很多,前半程cg很美,没有快进和存档,全是坏结局没有好结局。
没了,祝大家玩得开心愉快
以及我并不推荐评论拉票行为,这完全是一种助长喂答辩作者的歪风邪气,很多好游戏作者都拿不到五千评论。如果有看到这条评价的中国玩家,请大家不要因为这个原因去拉票。。。如果这回让她得逞了,下回只会喂更答辩的东西和要求更高的评论标准,,,,,
I CRIED MY EYES OUT # FREAKING TIMES. OMG BRO. I HATE THIS SMM. BUT GOOD JOB ON THE GAME JENNYYYY